Amazing job Ashleigh, you did a great job conveying this girls story and theres no doubt that everyone in the classroom was moved. The only critique I have is to just ensure that the audio parts aren't getting cut off, sometimes transitions can do that, but really an incredible job.
Thank you for sharing this story with the class. This was definitely the most emotional video that was done by our class. Your final was a huge transformation from the rough draft and I give you major credit for that. You really listened to the feedback that was given by us and pretty much started all over- which can be incredibly frustrating. I really liked how you started with her story from her heart attack at PF instead of from her parents meeting. I really liked how most of the video was her interview footage rather than stills. I showed my roommates this and they really enjoyed it. I hope this video goes far because it is really moving. Great job and congratulations on graduating! I wish you the best!
You did an awesome job with this video and you definitely improved from your rough draft. I'm glad you decided to focus more on her story and not as much solely on her mother. The video interviews with your subject really brought the whole piece together and the part where she gets emotional is really central to this. Awesome job, and I'm glad the American Heart Association is going to use this!
Amazing job Ashleigh, you did a great job conveying this girls story and theres no doubt that everyone in the classroom was moved. The only critique I have is to just ensure that the audio parts aren't getting cut off, sometimes transitions can do that, but really an incredible job.
ReplyDeleteAshleigh,
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing this story with the class. This was definitely the most emotional video that was done by our class. Your final was a huge transformation from the rough draft and I give you major credit for that. You really listened to the feedback that was given by us and pretty much started all over- which can be incredibly frustrating. I really liked how you started with her story from her heart attack at PF instead of from her parents meeting. I really liked how most of the video was her interview footage rather than stills. I showed my roommates this and they really enjoyed it. I hope this video goes far because it is really moving. Great job and congratulations on graduating! I wish you the best!
Hey Ashleigh,
ReplyDeleteYou did an awesome job with this video and you definitely improved from your rough draft. I'm glad you decided to focus more on her story and not as much solely on her mother. The video interviews with your subject really brought the whole piece together and the part where she gets emotional is really central to this. Awesome job, and I'm glad the American Heart Association is going to use this!